Extract A- the main character is a women who has done something wrong and it is affecting her future.
Extract B- the main character is a women who wants to become a doctor but doesn't have enough qualifications.
Extract C- this is about a doctor who's working in a overcrowded surgery and it's very busy. You can see this from the use of ellipsis and short sentences.
Extract D- a doctor who has a positive look of life.
Extract E- perspective of the doctors wife as she believes that the patients go first and she's left alone.
Extract F- this is from the perspective of the patient who visits the doctors often. You can see this from "it's becoming more like my local church than a doctors surgery".
Extract G- this is about a independent receptionist who wants to have a home visit but the doctor can't come due to him being ill. The underline meaning could be that patients excuses are silly.
I think extract B (a women who wants to become a doctor but doesn't have enough qualifications) has the most effective opening because the main character gets straight to the point.
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